An excerpt from "Bella and Bea," a novel for preteens
Bea got on her bike and went down the hill to the pond. She put the bike down by the wooden railing and made her way onto the shady path; the coolness of the air inviting like a cloud moving across the hot sun. As she came nearer to the water’s edge she heard whistling. She began to whistle back. Suddenly the whistling stopped and Bea stood still.
“Hey,” yelled Bea and then she let out a whistle. She looked down the shoreline but it was empty except for some big rocks and course sand on the shore.
Suddenly, a shrill whistle screeched in the silence. It was so close that Bea jumped.
She turned around and saw Jono
“Hey, what are you doing? That hurt my ears,” said Bea a bit irritated.
Jono just shrugged his shoulders and scampered down the path towards a rock that was half in the water.
Without an invite, Bea followed him thinking that if he didn’t want her there, he would say so. Near a tree on the shore, Jono had stashed a fishing rod and tackle box. He took out a fishhook from his tackle box and attached it to his rod. He then held up some bait; a slimy, squirmy worm.
Bea held out her hand, a gesture that made Jono raise his eyebrow with surprise and curiosity.
“Do you fish?” he asked.
“I have,” said Bea not offering more information.
“Okay, let’s see you hook the worm and set out the line.”
Bea smiled and took the wiggly worm out of Jono’s hand. She hooked the worm and swung the rod overhead. Jono watched the arc of the line and the spot where the hook landed in the water.
“Nice,” he said.
Bea smiled again and handed the rod to Jono.
For a while all they heard was the soft rustling of leaves and bird songs. Bea broke the silence. “Where’s Lucky?”
“Dad took him to the vet’s,” said Jono looking out into the water.
“Is he okay?” Bea asked with concern.
“Yeah, needs his yearly shots.”
“You must love having him. He’s such a good dog. So, why the name Lucky?”
Jono’s face darkened as if a stormy cloud covered it. “Just because,” he said more quietly.
“Because he gives you luck?” Bea asked
“Not really ...”
“Well, is it because he’s lucky, I mean like being a cat that has nine lives?” Bea persisted.
“Yeah, I guess you could say that. He was brought to the animal shelter when he was a pup. There was a fire and well his mother and another pup from the litter didn’t get out in time. But Lucky did and we got him. We didn’t name him; the people at the shelter did.”
“Wow that is so sad and happy at the same time. Lucky was sure lucky,” said Bea as she stole a glance at Jono.
“Yeah he is,” Jono said glancing back at her.
This time, Bea looked straight at him and said, “I hope he brings you luck, Jono,”
Jono did not say anything but looked out into the pond. It was a beautiful summer day. The water was smooth, soft and still. Every now and then bullfrogs croaked and dragonflies skimmed the surface of the pond. The blue sky and clouds reflected in the water. Bea looked out to the other side of the pond.
“Jono, what’s the pond like in winter. Can you skate on it?”
“Winter, yeah, you can,” he mumbled.
Before she could stop herself, Bea asked, “What’s it like here in winter?”
The dark cloud came across Jono’s face again. “Cold, icy. I hate it.”
“Oh,” she said softly and remembered what Dad had told her about the accident a few winters ago. She was ready to change the subject when the fishing rod began to bend. “Jono,” a fish, she whispered, “Reel it in.”
He stood there on the rock and held onto the fishing rod tightly with his left hand as he reeled in the fishing line with his right. He cranked and cranked as the rod kept bending. Just as he was pulling back on the rod, Bea yelled, “Faster, Jono, faster. It must be a huge fish!”
And out of the water came a good sized bass flopping on the line. With a wide grin, Jono held the fish up high. The dark cloud on his face was gone.
Marilyn London-Ewing
December 2011
December 2011
2 comments:
marilyn, what i read is the threads of an unstated and evolving bond between bea and jono.
nicely unwrapped through a snapshot scene.
the names are fabulous
love
karen
Marilyn, I loved the opening two lines. The timing and tension were perfect, they gave that reader's thrill that tells me this is going to be a good one. Thanks so much! Linda from Wednesday night group.
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